Wednesday, April 28, 2010

My Novel Pitch

This is a story about a girl name Varonica that has trouble with other kids in her school.Almost every day they pick on her.Sometimes they even hit her and they usually get away with it. All the trouble she goes through makes her feel very sad. But sometimes she wishes she could transfer to another school.Her mother does'nt have the money to pay for another school for her to go to,so next her mother tries to have a meeting with her teachers and the principal.But it didnt work.One time she came to school and some girls started to beat on her.Will the madness stop? happening or will it keeps going?.

3 comments:

Guillermo said...

I LOVE UR NOVEL PRJECT,know I NOW THE STORY IS ABOUT A GIRL NAME Varonica,THAT HAS BEEN PICKED ON EVERY SINGLE DAY.

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Editor said...

Deyonna-
Excellent work so far. Keep going with your outline.
Make sure you put a space after a period when you type.
Mr. Enders